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IMDB rating: 7.80 Plot: Lt. John Dunbar is dubbed a hero after he accidentally leads Union troops to a victory during the Civil War. He requests a position on the western frontier, but finds it deserted. He soon finds out he is not alone, but meets a wolf he dubs “Two-socks” and a curious Indian tribe. Dunbar quickly makes friends with the tribe, and discovers a white woman who was raised by the Indians. He gradually earns the respect of these native people, and sheds his white-man’s ways. |
Actors: Chaykin Maury,Greene Graham,Grant Rodney A.,Pastorelli Robert,Westerman Floyd ‘Red Crow’,Costner Kevin,Lee Chasing His Horse Nathan,Spears Michael,Lone Hill Jason R.,Pierce Tony,Rocket Charles,Herman Jimmy,Drama,Western,Adventure,
What do you think of my story so far?
I’m writing a short story titled "The Queen of Reninia" and the story is based on one of my favorite coworkers who is my mentor/role model.
What do you think of my story so far?
Queen Latasha Connell ruled the kingdom of Reninia with an iron fist and gentle heart. She was considered one of the best dressed and positive queens in all the world.Latasha always had a smile on her face. Even when she wasn’t showing off her neat row of pearly whites her expression often remained calm and suttle. She was so mellow that people who were sad or stressed out would begin to feel relaxed after spending a few minutes with her.
Kammy Lynn was Latasha’s assistant. Kammy Lynn considered it an honor to work for the great,mighty, and awesome Queen Latasha. She enjoyed being under her wing and she looked up to Latasha as a role model.Kammy Lynn was one of the only workers allowed in Latasha’s bedroom besides Emmem,the chef. Kammy Lynn took pride in keeping Latasha’s room and closet neat. She loved being in her capacious closet for it was filled with beautiful garments. Jeans,khakis,blouses,tees,evening gowns,and pajamas hung from satin hangers. Stillettos,boots,dress flats,pumps,casual shoes,and gym shoes were displayed on the glass shelves. Purses in all shapes and sizes hung from gold hooks.
More than anything Kammy Lynn wanted to accompany Queen Latasha to a party.Latasha would go out twice a week for a night of fun. Latasha would choose 4 of her workers to accompany her for a night of fun. The workers would gather before Queen Latasha and she would pick 4 of them to go out for a night on the town.Latasha had to approve of their outfits and hairstyles before they could set out with her.
"That’s a nice outfit.It compliments you."
"Oh no that hairstyle doesn’t do a thing for you.Please go fix your hair."
"Love the shoes."
After she approved of their attire, they would set out with her to one of the local pubs or clubs. Her favorite spot was "The Coconut Hut Pub." A few of her friends would meet her and 4 of her workers there and they would dance, laugh, joke, talk, wolf down beverages, and enjoy tantalizing foods.Kammy Lynn wanted to party with her hero. She hadn’t yet been picked to go out for a night of fun.
i only liked the 1st sentence. 2 b honest it sounded a lil obsessive. completely obvious. its a lil short of terrible. idk where ur going w/ this. but it has potential if it wasnt a homage 2 someone.
Courtney | Jan 31, 2010
sorry, this is too drawn out and I didn’t read it all
agree with courtney
and pearly white
What's It 2 U | Jan 31, 2010
it’s ok but in my opinion…I think you should work on it a lil bit more
The Modern Day Poe | Jan 31, 2010
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